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Ansuman
27/06/2012 3:50am

অল্প কিন্তু ভাল অায়োজন ভাস্কর। সব কবিতাই কিছু না কিছু ভাল কথা বলছে। দেবযানী বাসু, স্বর্নদীপ বনিক, ওবায়েদ আকাশ, রিপন হালদার ভালো লাগলো বেশি। আশিস সরকার ও বেশ থমথমে একটা ব্যাপার তৈরী করেছেন। রিপন হালদারের কবিতার বিশেষত্ব হল অধুনিক উদাসীনতা আর সমসাময়িক মূলকের ব্যবহার। কবিতায় এর প্রয়োজনীয়তা কতটুকু তা বিশেষ ভাবনার বিষয়। সরোজ রায় এর থেকে তারই আঙ্গিকে নতুন কিছু দর্শন উপহার দিতে অনুরোধ/দাবী জানাই। দুয়েন্দে এগিয়ে চলুক।

ভোটিং সিস্টেমের জন্য বোধহয় পাঠকরা আলোচনায় আসছেন না বলে মনে হচ্ছে। না কি কী ব্যাপার!!

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
28/06/2012 1:52am

@anshu

abaro tomar clean comment protyasha puron korlo.. protyek barer motoi

ashis sorkarer kobita ki sundor goromer ekta lu boie dichchhe na? sundor chitro kolaj toiri korechhen ini

ripon er kobita bes ektu rajnoitik o bote ei somoye darie... somkalin mulok er byaboharer ei somokalin sobdotar songe amio ekmot.... tobe proyojoniota nie kichhu na bolleo ami etuku bolbo,,, eta thik j ei rokom somokalinota kobitar ayur kkhoti kore kintu etao to thik j sob kobitar abohomaner kotha bolbar dorkar nei,,, somokalin kothao ekebare somokalin mulok sonjogei ami pathok hisabe swarthoporer moto pete chai... tate kobitar ektu kkhoti hole amar apotti nei

abar etao vabi theatre shilpo ta tar gothon goto dik thekei somokalin o rajnoitik hote badhya,,, ebong furie gelei ses tar kono chirokalin sonchoy hoy na cinema ba kobitar moto... somvumitrer theatre r amra dekhte pabo na... sudhu smriti... kintu kivabe j benche achhhe r aschorjo rokom abohoman hoye achhhe...

asole somokalin lekhao sothik utkorshotay pouchale amader smriti sei somokalin mulok guloke palte palte nie thik take aure jete thake ei vabe se abohoman hoye othe.... tumi ki bolo?

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
28/06/2012 1:57am

comment er ovaber byapare mar mone hoy, amra jevabe din din alos hochchhi tate onekei hoyto vabchhen vote kore eto sohoje comment hoye jachchhe r bistarito likhe porisrom ba somoy khoroch korar mane ki!!

kintu er cheye amar onya ekta kotha mone hoy anshu,
amader bangla kobitay ekta oitijhya achhe, amra besirvag lok se printed kagoj holeo nijer lekha r chena jana kobir du ekta lekha chhara puro kagoj porte raji noy... comment to onek porishromer byapar

tachhara ekhane tumi lokhya korbe 70% kobi achhe jara internet a sabolil non... tara dekhcchhen amake phone kore sokal bikal montobya jabnachchhen kintu tar besi korte tara aroshto...

r jara net a khub sabolil tara suchipotro dekhe vabchhen hoyto porchhen o kintu montobya korchhen na!

pathok o kobira amake maf korben... kintu eta amar mone hoy tai bollam...

asole jontro ki r communication barie dite pare? manusher mon jodi na chay....

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ansuman
29/06/2012 3:56pm

ei jontro to communication baranor jonnoi.. kintu sobai dekhe tekhe niye chupchap bose thakle amra bujhchina j amader kobita gulo kon maner.. egulo alochona korle.. amader kobi hoye othar pothe onek ta sahajyo pai ar ki..
tomake jodi keu phon kore motamot dyai kono specific kichu tahole tumi post kore dile besh bhalo hoy.. jodi tomar bisesh apotti na thake..

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
30/06/2012 12:53pm

ok ebar theke ami comment gulo post kore debo

ansuman
29/06/2012 4:00pm

bhaskar tomar sathe ami ekmot... kichu shilpo to erakam hoy e ja somoy ke tule dhore.. seta khub e joruri o.. ei khetre kobitar bisesh khoti hoy boleo bola ta thik noy... asole sei kobita tai serakam.. hote pare sei kobitar ayu kam.. kintu ajker upor daag rekhe jay.. shudhu bhobisyote kobi jeno nije na bodh koren j thik kotha bolini ba pokkhopaat dusto chhilo tar kono chhapa lekha...tahole tini e nijeke kolonkito mone korte paren ontore ontore..

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
30/06/2012 12:54pm

eta darun bolechho.. asole jini likhchhen tini ki likhchhen kyano likhchhen tar kachhe poriskar thakle r kono proshno thake na...

Asish sarkar
30/06/2012 2:39pm

angshomaner kbita besh kayekti parlum or vasha citrakalper kichu ekta ntunatya ache ja akrshan kare.Debjani kabitay je vabe purono shabdagulo ke tule anen tate baichitra ache jeman ama,heno,eha ityadir tar-i-shange vabnake natun dishay rakhen bhalo laglo tabe bishayta chamaker parjaye thakle bhalolagena sedike satarka thakle kabita ekta natun bhasa pabe balei mane hai. Debasis saha bhalo laglo,ripon o khub samasamayik.aro aneker kabita valo laglo swarojRoy ballam na karan aponjan pakhyapater doshe dushta hote pare .bangla kabitar oitejhyer katha bala hai kintu katojan shei oitjhyer sange poricato hoar chesta kari .kabiro annyer kabita para uchit sekatha amra kajan ar mane rakhi balun.kabitar ashare dekhi nijer kabit para holei uthe jabar janay ushkhush karte karte uthe chale jete.jeno nijert shonano ebng prano tai jaruri kaj.kichu katha khrap lagle marjana cheye rakhi. .Bhashkarjoyoti babu apnar sampadana bishesh ullyekher dabi rakhe

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
30/06/2012 3:04pm

amito ekta jinis bujhte parina.. jara onyer kobita poren na ba sonen na tader ki voy hoy na? j tader kobitao onyera porbe na ba shunbe na thik taderi moton....

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ashis sarkar
02/07/2012 5:56pm

Jara atmahatya kare taraki vabe ki habe

Bhaskarjyoti Das
30/06/2012 3:07pm

thik bolechhen asis babu... debjani khub sabolil r chomotkar vabe koho heno jatio tothakothito borjito shobdo byabohar koren... ebong tar pasapasi coraption ebong kharapson jatio sobdo to drishty kotu lagenai borong chomotkar manie jay... debjanir ebishoye sotyi dokkhota achhe...

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Swarnadeep Banik
02/07/2012 1:50pm

internet ami khub bhalobhabhe handle korte pari na. Jake bole english gaan-er bhashay "Video killed the radio star". (Nijeke ami star bolchi na,emni kothay-kothay).Jak ebar prosonge ashi, besh koyekjon-er kobita bhalo laglo. Aro koyekta thakle bhalo hoto. sonkhya-ta besh poripati.Ar ei sonkhya-r onek goddo porte na parle marjona korben. Blame it to my inexperience.Thank you,sir.

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Saroj Roy
03/07/2012 3:37am

ami apluto. RATPARI sabar valo legechhe bole. e apnar janyi.. sujog diechhilen bolei. ami kritogno.

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
03/07/2012 3:39am

mention not... it is may pleasure and duty as an editor... my success also.. kobitar joy hok.. hurray!!

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Ripon Halder
03/07/2012 3:41am

amar kobitati konovabei somokalin rajnoitik kobita noy. eta bohirongo. tobe eke ekti byartho daat vanga biplober kobita bolte paren...

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
03/07/2012 3:42am

rajnoitik shobdotake vabarthe dhora uchit.. tahole dekhbe kono biplob e orajnoitik hote pare na...

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Swarnadeep Banik
03/07/2012 10:26pm

Amar eccentricity-ke keu patta dayni dekhe bhalo laglo. Bhaskarbabu-ke akta jiggaso: Accha stylization ki akhonkar kobitar bhasha? Onek-er kobitay akhon ami onek-er kobitay ta dekhte pai,jemon debjani ma'am-er corruption na kharapson dhora jaak-pun-er darun byabohar tobe kobitay seta ki style-er prokarontar noy?(ma'am,ami e kotha bole apnar kobita-ke khato korte chai na).Subhash mukhopadhyay-er akta kobita ache- NAAMCHI(if I am not wrong).Sekhane kobi siri theke naamar bhongitake naamchi likhe duto opurno porbe niye aane,ja sei sthithi-take bojhay seta akebare jothajotho style
(Acknowledgement-Sir Sujit Sarkar).dekhun,ami sudhumatro debjani ma'am-er udahoron tullam,aro onek paoa jay.Bhaskarjyotibabu-r uttor-er ashay roilam.Ar jodi amar kora montobyo jodi kauke hurt kore,tobe I am sorry.
P.S-amar kobita jodi karor bhalo lege thake ba mondo,ubhoypokkho,even bhaskarjyotibabu-o,somalochona korun.Ete amar kobita aro upokrito hobe.at last,thank you to give my eccentricity.

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
05/07/2012 5:16am

stylization to ekta gurutwopurno tool hisabe byabohuto hoy onek din thekei... jodio kobitai amdanir boyosta tulonay kom... jamon pratul jokhon banglay gan gai ganta gan... kori banglay HAHAKAR shobdo take eksonge na uchchharon kore HA-HA-KAR hisabe venge koren.. jate hahakar ta onuvuto hoy... shomvumitrer abriti ba ovinoye erokom onek drishtanto achhe.. eta sofol vabe hole bes chhueye jay... debjanir kobitatay sei safollo achhe bolei amar ovimot...

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Saroj Roy
05/07/2012 5:12am

kobita lekha hoy nanan chitrokolpe o angike. ek ekjon kobir shobdo chayan o gathanshaily alada alada kobi jvabe tar nijeshwa vasay kotha bolun seta pathoker kachhe pouchhe jay ... valo laglo onek kobitai. Duende benche thak.

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
05/07/2012 5:18am

swarnodip ba saroj babu ba asis babur moto jara internet a besi thaken na tarao j vabe comment dichchhen ami sompadok hisabe apluto...

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Swarnadeep banik
05/07/2012 11:06pm

Sarojbabu-r kotha khub bhalo laglo.tobe murto chitrokolpo-gulo jodi kobita-i na hoye uthlo,tobe ta kobita na hoye chitrokolpo hoye othe.jemon sonkho ghosh-er 'joubon'.osadharon chitrokolper proyog,tobe ta akta nitol kobita.Whatever,17 bochor boyoshi ak kobitalekhok-er elemelo kothay koyekjon motamot korechen,dekhe khushi lagche.Tobe gothonmulok adda,tokhon-i gore othe,jokhon 'mukhomukhi bosibar' sujog gore othe,ekhanei internet-er drawback.
P.S- bhaskarjyoti babu,karor shoili jodi ak murto shilpe dikkhito hoy,tobe ta style na hoye ak protishtan-e giye daray.jemon-bob dylan.se naki sure gaan gay,that doesn't matters,tar gaan manusher mon chulo,etai boro kotha.nothing else matters,then.Nah,eirokom kotha mukhomukhi bosei bola chole,asol-e adda aktorpha hote pare na.jai hok,thank you all.

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Bhaskarjyoti Das
06/07/2012 3:03pm

kake murto r kake bimurto bolchho ektu details a bolo

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Swarnadeep Banik
11/08/2012 4:57pm

Murto shilpo maane aami bojhate cheyechilam amon ak shilpo ja gore tole ak nijoswata. Ato deri kore peply daoar jonno I apologize.Asha kori jibonananda sobhaghor-e apnar kobitapath somadrito hoyeche,na aste parar jonno dukkhito.


P.S: Amar naam SWARNADEEP, Swarnadip likhben na please

Bhaskarjyoti Das
06/07/2012 3:08pm

@swarnodip,

eta nie ki kono prosno thakte pare j mukhomukhi addar obokash o moja onek besi?

kintu etao thik...1 web mag e potrikar vobissoy
2 amra kintu kobita likhi... na hole sudhui abritti kortam
3 amra jotno kore kyano monishider chithigulo chhapi? tokhon to internet chhilo na...
4 kotha bolte hobe.. se j madhyamei hok.. batite khaoar moja jodi kom hoy tabole ki cup na thakle batite cha khabe na? madhyam ta boro kotha noy...
5 r likhit addar sobche boro moja tar documentation theke jay...

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